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I like the first half, the second half is alright but could be better with a little brainstorming. :)

gotcha...I'll thimk on it...
hmm..."And the Spartan mother said . Come back carrying your shield or on it...or runaway if it get's too dangerous"

Naw...More brainstorming needed.

How about "The Wussification of Boys: How Society is Creating Wimps" ? Like that? You can also change boys to America, but the steemit community is international - so I think boys would get more clicks.

Or just say Kids instead of boys - depends how you want to write it.

No worries. And I wasn't feminizing, I was nagging. There's a difference. :)

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