Every Heart has it's Thorns

in #teardrops • 6 years ago

Silently our hearts has it's own weakness, It circled with a thorns that anytime you can feel the sharpness of it that slowly piercing your heart. Your emotion become weaker and weaker that it's hard to recover from what is happening in your life.

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6 years ago in #teardrops by
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     6 years ago 

    You have a minor grammatical mistake in the following sentence:

    Silently our hearts has it's own weakness, It circled with a thorns that anytime you can feel the sharpness of it that slowly piercing your heart.
    It should be its own instead of it's own.

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