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This is absolutely beautiful. Dark and moving. I am honored to have taken part in the defiant sparking of such an amazing piece of art, thank you for the mention!

It means a lot to me that you think so! <3
I was afraid to call it a short story because I don't follow traditional writing rules - in fact they are the reason I didn't write for so many years. Now I just find myself writing things down in any way that seems to fit the expression. No defined form just freedom :)

Thank you :) <3
Well, I don't know anything about traditional writing rules, but I'm generally a fan of breaking rules :-)

Nice one! Please check out my posts where I have written short stories and share feedback if you have any.

hello
You are writing beautifully
greetings
creativesoul

Thank you and greetings :)

This really struck a chord in my heart... Thank you for sharing

Thank you so very much for reading <3

Glorious creation!!! I'm so proud of you omg. <3

Yaay - so happy you liked it <3

The writing is full of creativity. I can tell the juices are flowing. Thanks for sharing.

Yeah - today was a really good writing day :)
Apparently writers are supposed to 'write about what they know'.
In this case it worked - thanks for reading!

Great story and art.
following you

great story, it's very relatable. It's dark but hopeful. I really like it

I am glad it's relatable and that you can see the hope in the darkness. <3

Wow! This was really great writing. I'm very impressed with this piece. It was beautiful and imaginative. I'm so happy this one did great.

Thank you so much for reading my story :)
I think it did great because it came from a place of passion.
The rest of my writing came from my mind - this one came from my heart <3

i really enjoyed reading this and i think is all about immagination and what you feel inside connecting both this two elements in perfrct combination of chosen words is unique and very important ,,congrats you are creqtive 4 real :)

Thank you for reading my story. By blending imagination with real experiences I was able to create a world where what you see is not the whole story. Glad you liked my chosen words. Metaphor is wonderful that way :)

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