RE: One Love- Steemit Vision Quest and 100 Day Poetry Challenge-Day 84
Dear @trucklife-family,
Your poem is shaped like a tree and planted in the heart of community.
It begins with a simple hope and grows and flows and ignites and takes wings then this tree is a spiritual forest fire giving birth even to the pine cones that have been dormant.
I like the love in this poem but I am honestly disgruntled about everything and about nothing. Actually I need the power of this love now more than ever. I'm really thankful for your challenge:
Now, close your eyes and image the world that you wish to see, the world you wish to live in.
Many have lost that world and given up on the dream.
that is what you must project out into the world.
It would be easier to wait for someone else to make a change. Why suffer unnecessarily when things won't change anyway?
thank you so much @mineopoly for your beautiful feedback. We must never give up, change is happening all around us, it just takes time to gather people together, but our roots will be strong when the time comes xx