A disturbing story that leaves us a bitter taste about relationships. There is so much that brings us closer and so much that distances us, so much that makes us fall in love and so much that disappoints us; that it is difficult to conclude why some couples remain united all together and others separate after fighting together for a long time. It seems that fear and insecurity sometimes conspire against a full and happy life as a couple.
Well done, @agmoore! Here's a good story.
I really appreciate that, @zeleiracordero! You're right: fear and insecurity. These block communication and self-understanding. If a poet, such as yourself, appreciates my simple story about ordinary people--well, that's gratifying :)
Thank you very much.