Awesome story, @dbzfan4awhile. I love the transition to the living room floor. This is very well written and emotionally engaging.
Awesome story, @dbzfan4awhile. I love the transition to the living room floor. This is very well written and emotionally engaging.
Thanks so much! I really liked the idea of the action transitioning to play and then to pain to overcome.
It worked very well in the story! Well done!
Thanks so much.