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RE: The Allies of Old; Book Two Renewal: Chapter Thirty One "Shock and Truth"
Each chapter that built up to this moment was beautiful and this chapter in particular is groundbreaking. I felt every emotion and resonated with the despair, confusion and hurting pain. The timing of me reading these last four chapters has been perfect. What a masterpiece you have written and shared with us. So glad the truth has been brought to light. Now to see how things mend forward from her with everything out in the open.
I'm just catching up on your comments, I'm so happy to hear your feelings about this my friend :) Most people who have read this both on steemit and off expressed similar sentiments about this, which is awesome because it was meant to be the chapter that made all of their difficulties worthwhile .
My one critic of it, ha, - I couldn't imagine writing it that way without it being insignificant and rather boring lol. Actually I understood those feelings about it before getting to these last chapters, most people would be thinking 'tell him already!' I've always liked tense situations where you find yourself wanting to shake sense into characters that ultimately led to an "Ahh, there we go' type of moment :)
Yeah you certainly achieved the ultimate release of tension. so glad she finally opened up and he has now accepted her fully. I shall leap bound into your most recent chapters very shortly my friend :)