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RE: Henry Monde my short life and long death....The wooden Cart
Hi @scottish01, this is really atmospheric and it really picked up for me when he was having to sort the body parts. I did think that his brother Luna should be brought into the story earlier to set up the conflict, but I liked the twisty ending a lot.
I actually really appreciate the feedback and it does make sense, I should have built and explored their relationship earlier. Thank you.