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RE: Begriff

in #story6 years ago

I like to thank again for @brisby for participating and helping out with the third ping-pong round. We'll definitely finish it off with the fourth one, time to put this to a close!

To pull from my post to here:


Start blurb:

"I'm no longer accepting the things I cannot change... I'm changing the things I cannot accept." - Angela Yvonne Davis. The start of all revolutionaries whence they see the need to change this. The start of revolutionary fervor and revolutionary thinking. A quote from a person so interconnected to the BPP that is worth sharing.

End blurb:

"Our scribblings are usually not lyrics but whirrings, without colour or resonance, like the tone of an engine-wheel. I believe that the cause lies in the fact that when people write, they forget for the most part to dig deeply into themselves and to feel the whole import and truth of what they are writing" - Rosa Luxemburg.

Of course, with the last round, these quotes do highlight and encapsulate the our parts while being an integral part of what was written here. In particular, the starter quote is self-evident: it takes a will to change things and courage to fight for a life that's worth living. The closer quote is little less on the nose, but lemme humour ye readers: the artistry @brisby has to play into the character's psychologies and everyday pathologies (psychologically deemed abnormalities) with her mannerisms and typing hands is beautiful to read into. And I know fo' sho' @brisby will say that of me as well, but to move unto the point: it takes more than being a master grammarian, to possess good wordsmanship, to be a person that has fun with the reader as their own jesters or even knowing how to reveal things over time. Indeed, it requires the harnessing of one's self and biases to push the envelop of making a reader say a work was good to then say that they saw these scribbles as indeed lyrical. To hear music in their ears when they read word after word to then enjoy the entire music piece that was merely only scribbles. This much, I say @brisby has done well; look forward to crafting that final ping-pong round to top of this match!

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We're getting to see deeper into the strong Saddie, with your ending between her and the Lady in this story especially. There are scars that run deep but she is amassing a group of caring people who will stand by her and be there when she needs. (Especially as her sweet witch isn't around.)
I'm truly appreciative to you for the time and care you've put into our co-written posts, Felix. While I realize that a good portion of it is to maintain your level of quality, you go beyond to listen to suggestions and incorporate them into the story line that you're planning out for your written world.
Atop that you craft your works to convey more than just the events that play out for your characters. Through your fiction, you incorporate your passions. Each piece that you write speaks for your desire for people to live in a world where people can live their lives without the suffering that comes from hatred, judgement, greed, and ill-will. An absolutely beautiful wish and one that will come as more people stand together to fight injustices and to help those in need.
(Also, this pic of Ashley is SO cute!!!)

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