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RE: FREE OR NOT (An Original Poem)
I like the unexpected nature we find in freedom. Sometimes a cool drink of water, other times a den of lions. You captured this yo-yo effect beautifully, and I have to agree with @robyneggs that my favorite line is that of the statues.
Cheers mate!
Thnaks, ironicly enough this line was changed by me on the last second - it was originaly a line about the statues of the Eastern island, but i couldnt make it flow
it was better the way it ended up, because easter island was an image it evoked. Success!