I have a craving for BLOOD

in #story7 years ago (edited)

Please remember this story is being written and posted everyday. I am writing today's episode and posting it HERE without reading through and editing. Please forgive me any errors and typos.


I CRAVE 01 Written by Sobowale Oluwafunke Lydia
"The lips which will be markedly full and red are drawn back from the teeth which gleam long, sharp as razors, and ivory white."-Montague Summers.

Juanita heard the woosh of wind by her right. Her muscles tightened, she tensed, she wasn't alone, she was in danger! She cursed as her breathing pattern got harder and faster. Another woosh by her right. Whatever was moving was fast. Way too fast. For the first time in her life, she was really scared, her blood became hot, her hands grew limp, her knees gave way. She wasn't doing this, something was controlling her, she struggled to gain control of her body but the more she tried, the more she spiralled out of control. She was kneeling now with her hands dropped beside her.

She felt a force snap her face forward. Her face was fixed to the front. She felt forces drawing her body and keeping it hooked to the ground. She stared in horror. Her blue eyes became grey.
A flash of red light beamed and gave way to white light. She could see a man in a black shadowy gown, his face was hidious like a burnt cracked clay pot, his hair was pitch black. He fixed an angry gaze on her then smiled sinisterly. He drew Juanita closer to him with his fingers and tilt her neck, her blood smelt tantalizing which made his fangs long and sharp. He forced himself to her, had sex with Juanita -He was a sadomasochistic (person who enjoys both inflicting and receiving pain for sexual gratification) sex, he bit Juanita's neck, he injected his venom(poison usually injected to a prey) into her bloodstream. She felt weak, she couldn't resist and her skin began to sparkle like a diamond.
Juanita Walcott, a 23 year old woman was born and raised in Virginia, she was from a poor family though loved by most people because of her beauty, politeness and generosity. She was good at sewing clothes and drawing things related go nature which made her enjoy going to the forest alone to draw the trees and animals. Juanita was a single mother, the name of her daughter was Miranda. Miranda was 5 years old, Juanita was always proud of her daughter because Miranda was very brilliant, intelligent and beautiful. Miranda was Juanita's weakness. Juanita's best friend name was Vicky, they were friends since high school.
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Nicely written. I adore your strong use of simile and metaphors. Befitting choice of words.

Thanks you so much, thanks for reading @peterwrites

Nice work you got here

Choice of words gives you a sense of everything in the story. You feel yourself in it. Nice work really. Imma need tutorials on how u come about your metaphors and similes

Lol, thanks for reading and I really need tutorials from you also @khojo

Nice one sweetie 😘

you are most welcome!

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