THE LAST MAN STAND

in #story6 years ago

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The sound of car horns became the usual thing to adorn the daily life of Jakarta residents who are stuck in traffic to return home this afternoon. Among the many people, Josh and his friends Peter, Hermann and Rumi are also waiting for this never-ending traffic, a group of teenagers who just finished their fourth semester at a city's leading university. Four friends who have known each other since sitting in high school.
Josh is a student who is studying in government science, an activist from an internal campus organization, a typical leader with many considerations, he is the wisest of them, their friendship can continue to be intimate because Josh can be a mediator who has many solutions. Rumi is a taekwondo martial artist, a national championship holder, a very cautious and responsive person. In contrast to Hermann, arrogant, a child of an influential family in great mining control, in addition, Hermann was a boxing champion of the county level. Among them is Peter who is not the center of attention on campus, because he himself is a cool person with his own world, but behind it all, Peter is the most intelligent, he is a winner of science Olympiad and scientific papers, in addition Peter is also very master computer field. Just give him a cable and a circuit board, then he will take over your home security system.

Meanwhile...

"Crazy! The more severe aja ni jam. "Said Josh who was driving to open the conversation," yes iyalah, this hour tuh yes, the clock people are at home ngantor, "said Hermann with his Betawi tone.
Rumi is tinkering with the radio hoping to find out what information is going on at the end of the jam, while Peter is busy with his online game.

"Ss-se-sed ... there is a mass commotion that is on the way Mal ..."

suddenly radio broadcast itupun experience interference.

"Well why ya? Radio lo ugly ya ... hence have car treated ". Rumi said "btw, he said there was a clash there, so it jammed gini" continued Rumi. "Yes yes! Lo said I'm a budek !? Everything is heard "said Hermann. "Already-already noisy aje lo on!" Josh said.

Suddenly people were running from the front, full of panic, they crashed at each other. In the midst of the riot someone ran and crashed into their car to make the windshield crack. Their debate paused for a moment, they looked at each other in shock and confusion.

"Eh! What the hell is that? Until here clashing, "said Hermann who quickly got out of the car. However, Hermann was stunned to see a pale-eyed white woman with a bloody mouth having a seizure in front of her. "Is that okay?" Josh scolded.

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Your writing skills is of the chain

in fact I just had no other option left by to follow you and you flip flop tenacity with words

Thanks for the comments. I am still in a learning stage in this writing. so yes there are still many exciting reviews. best regards for you friend

your learning?............ I learnt a lot from your posts I read

And I am presenting adjusting my style as we are speaking from what I saw you do with words

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