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RE: BELGIAN WAFFLES / conclusion / a short story dealing with discrimination
I loved this. The intro is written in such a way as to get you emotionally involved and asking yourself - wtf? Then you are lead to the twist, and it really makes you think. Deep, provocative, and very interesting.
Thanks @naquoya When I posted this story I was debating between a two parter or posting it all in one post, then when i saw the break you mentioned between the sections I though two parts it is. Thanks again, glad you enjoyed it.