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RE: The Symbiotic Protocol - Chapter 10 (My Original Novel)
I mus say, I almost completely agree with @jedau on this one. Although lacking in terms of action, the additional characterisation and expansion to the world you have setup make this easily my favourite chapter so far. I'm serious when I say this is professional stuff and I thank you for sharing it with us. Simply loving this and I can not wait for the next part.
Hey @myb. As I and the awesome @jedau mentioned before, this chapter was primarily for world building, fleshing out more backstory and also Drucker and Doug's hardship involved in solving the investigation. Will try to post the next one up soon and hopefully you keep on enjoying it as much as I enjoy writing it! :)
Thanks, my friend! :)