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RE: DWELLING The Novel - Chapter FOURTEEN: Booby Prize
Well, you have me intrigued to read on. I like the way you make the omni perspective flow from one character to the next. It reads like a natural transition. Curious to find out how all these people come together and what lies in store for them.
Thanks so much @mrashik, my developmental editor Maisie Cochran worked with me a lot on these transitions and it was a wonderful learning experience. Having written over a dozen screenplays, the years of work on Dwelling were my first real foray into prose and it was really fun to learn the ins and outs. Thanks for your support!