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RE: CAPTURED BY TIME (An Original Novel - Chapter 4)

in #story8 years ago

Good going. It’s getting exciting! Looks like the evil genius started to punish bad guys. I wonder if the governor’s last name reminds of Berlioz and Molly was summoned for a position of a ballroom hostess, following the lead of Margarita.

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I wanted to send you some translation/grammar/style correction if you are interested, but I am not sure if you'd like everyone to see them. Is there a way for me to send them to you privately?

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