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RE: Slow Burn - Part 2 (My Original Short Stories)
I definitely will. I enjoyed the first part and left you are a comment there as well. All is good.
Cheers
I definitely will. I enjoyed the first part and left you are a comment there as well. All is good.
Cheers
Actually, @mgaft1, I should be thanking you as you pointed out a glaring problem that I missed. It actually did look as if it was the end of the story which definitely would have been a real downer, lol.
So, I'll be indicating from now on at the end of each part, if it continues or ends there.
Thanks once again, @mgaft1.
The pleasure is all on this side of the cyberspace. Will wait for the part three and see how you will handle the change in the internal dynamics of your character. Also, maybe I also would like some explanation on why he behaved so erratically that everyone noticed it? Was this only caused by the contradiction between his perceived entitlement and the sobering reality or there was something else like psychological trauma or maybe drugs? Anyhow good luck.