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RE: A Part for The Community [Short Science Fiction Story] [Steemit Exclusive]
ooh. Creepy. Fascinating. And real enough to wonder if that isn't gonna happen soon. shivers
Just one thing that tripped me up
“You don’t have to be here,” Kate whispered into Laura’s ear. Her sister did not reply. << wrong POV I think.
Fixing. And yes. Give it two generations tops.