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RE: Cruel and Unusual - serialised novel EXCLUSIVE to Steemit Part 52
Um, how can Ralski be there? Wouldn't he be involved in the conversion of his new, er, companions?
Um, how can Ralski be there? Wouldn't he be involved in the conversion of his new, er, companions?
There are enough to look after them for the time being... he'll get back to them shortly :)
I'm delighted you're picking up on things though!
I'm going to have to go back over the story now and see if my explanation holds water ;)
I might not have picked up on it if I hadn't read 4 chapters in a row. Not sure I;m convinced yet though. The question still remains - why would he be following Red at that time?
He wanted a chat? ;)
I'll dig into it... see if it makes sense. It's a little difficult to get the full context in such short bursts, but you picked up on something I'd missed :)
I've just read this evening's excerpt and the answer is there - still a good catch though :)
Would you like to be a beta-reader for my next book in the Wolf series?