Message beyond the grave

in #story7 years ago

Hi steemians!
I am going to tell you a story in response to inuke’s story writing challenge # 3: Message beyond the grave.

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There was a rich man in the town, he had several servants working in his home, and one of them was Ramu.
Ramu was basically a lazy and greedy person, he was not able to progress to success because of his greed and laziness. There are many people succeed in the life, who joined the job after him.

His greed leads him to steal money and costly things. Just like that once, he stole a golden necklace from his boss's room, it has a lot of sentimental value for boss's wife. They suspect Ramu, because he was the only person who would go into the room, since they have trusted him.

"Ramu have you seen my necklace, that I left in my room," she asked to Ramu.
He shook his head " No, I didn’t see" he lied. After that incident they didn't allow him the room any more.
Years passed, due to the old age his boss becomes sick, He was suffering from cancer and died. Several people attend the funeral ceremony since he was a rich man. They have made a royal coffin for his body.In the coffin they put some of his favorite things like goggles, pouch, wrist watch, pipe, etc. also they left his diamond ring with him, which is more precious.

Ramu watch these things, and decided to steal at lease the diamond ring. His focus was on the ring throughout the day. They buried his body in their own land, in a concrete cemetery, and closed it with a granite stone lid.

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Ramu, waited till the day the relatives went, Then he decided to take the ring from the grave without knowing anyone at the night. The time lapsed almost 1 am everyone was sleeping, even the security, once he confirmed that all are sleeping, he went to the grave with a thick iron rod, watched left and right again confirmed that no one was watching him, started pulling the lid of the cemetery, it was not that easy which made with granite stone, he tried with the rod and finally he opened.

He jumped in to the grave and opened the coffin with the rod, the body was rotted, stinking, he wrap a clothe around his nose and mouth to avoid the smell, the tried to remove the ring from the finger of corpse , suddenly a hand, a deadly hand, a hand with tornned skin and bones caught his hand.

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"Oh Noooo" he screamed

That was the corpse, The corpse started talking "Never take the advantage of the person who most trusted you" and left him. Ramu heard the message and began to run from the grave. The message not only for Ramu, but for anyone who is greedy.

💚THE END 💚

Original short story authored by @jyoti-thelight for @inuke ’s story writing challenge # 3: Message beyond the grave

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This one of the best story I have read since I joined steemit. A story full of lessons. It was a bit scary though but the end was heartwarming.ckeep on writing dear friend

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