Super Short Scary Story #3
THE CRASH
A couple on a skiing vacation are driving in the mountains at night. The roads twist and turn, up and down, through the mountain bends. When suddenly they come across a car in the middle of the road.
The front is smashed in and the windshield is broken. Smoke is pouring from the hood.
As they stop the car, they notice a body is laying face first on the ground just a few feet infront of the crash.
The man gets out and rushes to the body. Checking for a pulse he realizes the body on the ground is still breathing, a struggled breath. Wait, it was trying to say something.
As he reached down, the body reached out and grabbed his arm.
Desperately a mans voice spoke through a bloody face
"You shouldn't have stopped! Run"
Then the man let his arm go and died right there.
Panic struck him and as he turned to run back he noticed his car was going in reverse. Driving away from him with his girlfriend in it.
He went to run after it, but as the view of the headleads dissapeared around a corner he heard a voice right behind him say
"You shouldn't have stopped!"
When I saw the lenght, I thought this is too short to develop a story, but this is really creepy and you did a great job :)
I'll be following you to see more stories like this.
I write stories too :)
Hey Thanks! I'm happy that you liked it.
I will follow you also
Nice one :) and scary!
I'm glad you found it to be scary!
If you liked this one, check out my other super short scary stories.