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RE: Hellbent - Part 2 (My Original Short Story)

in #story7 years ago

oooh!!! Love it!! There's some dark goings on going on here, no mistake. Miguel is innocent! He'll have to clear his name! Who's Orlon? Is Emerald a shady bint, or has she been pressured to pin an innocent man?

Yeah! Looking forward to the next instalment! :)

Also I think you should start choosing which actors you want to play which parts in the film version. ;-)

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Hey there, @johleen. Oh, thank you for the awesome feedback! This was meant to be a one-off short story but I've built up a much larger story arc in my mind. The main thing is a got off to the right start so thanks for your valued approval.

Lol, film characters! I'm gonna be racking my brains over that quandary from now on... :)

Thank again. Bless...

Very good news! Just these first 2 instalments already have the feel of a story that can keep on building and building. :)

I shall also be thinking of film characters, it's fun to do! I'll let you know if any suitable dark, deep and interesting men come to mind. Errr if you know what I mean haha!

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