RE: The Symbiotic Protocol - Chapter 10 (My Original Novel)
Woohoo! I finally got to read this on the first 30 minutes of the upload. It was purely by coincidence as I didn't intend to be redirected to Steemit, but there it was "The Symbiotic Protocol" at the top of my feed. Lucky!
Oh, man, so much world-building here. Not a lot of action as the previous chapter, but the information this provided, and the expansion in the other side has easily made this my favorite chapter as of present. I'm pretty sure there's going to be a steady transition in terms of favorites for this instant classic. It's very rare that I'm fortunate enough to read a series that's hitting on all cylinders and surpassing its benchmark with every chapter.
Now that the two story lines would finally converge, I can't wait to see where this epic takes us! Great job once again, my friend!
Listen @jedau. I'm telling you straight that you warm my heart, brother! Your fantastic description sum up exactly how I wanted this part to be perceived. Also highlighting the difficult struggle Drucker and Doug are coming up against with this unique case. You got everything I was trying to impart to the reader and I'm over the moon about that.
Both story lines will indeed conjoin together for the next part in what I consider to be the pivotal chapter of the book. Your support and encouragement is a treasure I'm fortunate enough to have and even saying thank you doesn't do it justice.
Blessings from the bottom of my heart, my bro! Just hope that the upcoming chapters hold a candle to your great compliments! :)
The credit is all yours, bro :D I interpreted it that way, because you clearly conveyed what you wanted to portray. I always find the "other" side's perspective (in this case Drucker and Doug's) to be the most compelling, since it shows the story from a different angle. Not a lot of people take the time to expound on that and just settle on telling the central characters' side, so I really appreciate it when the "other" characters get some love. (I refer to them as "other" since they're not supporting characters, but they have a huge role to play)
I love chapters on the brink of converging the most, but I'm pretty sure you're going to crush the convergence chapter! There is not a doubt in my mind that it won't only hold a candle, but it'll light the whole story up better than all the chapters before it :D I can't wait to read it! I hope I get the chance to see it in the first 30 minutes just like this one.
Beautifully put, my bro. Your feedback and comments are literally gold dust to me. Telling me what you see as the reader is so important as it's easy to get lost in the narrative when writing things from only my perspective. Very, very gratefully received, buddy...
I also try to be my harshest critic so at least I can rest assured by your amazing comments that the ship is being steered in the right direction. I can only pray that the proceeding chapters will warrant such humbling praise. Thank you so, so much, @jedau! Will try to get it posted up real soon, my friend! :)
Thank you for sharing stories like this and for appreciating my comments. Trust that I will continue to be honest with my comments. I don't leave positive comments just to ingratiate myself, it's just that your stories deserve every praise it gets :)
I really hope for a Steemit community where sharing feedback would just be second nature. I guess the cool thing about this platform is that you get to interact with your readers as you publish your stories. If I can't get a lot of interaction on my own posts, then at least I could interact with awesome writers like you, bro!