RE: The Symbiotic Protocol - Chapter 14 (2 of 2) (My Original Novel)
I'm glad that it was the winner, as I couldn't imagine a better backstory! :D Also, the initial Sy conversation might have been to premature if it was before the gas station and could've been too convoluted if it was slotted between the chase. Awesome choices all around! This is what makes discussing stories in the comments section fun. Readers get a look of the stories that could've been and the thought process behind every chapter, while the authors get instant feedback and encouragement. Everyone's a winner!
I would be honored to help out any way I can, you know that, brother :D Although, for the purity of The Symbiotic Protocol, I think it would be great if your vision remained intact, and we could just collaborate on a different project. But, if you feel that my thoughts regarding AI would be beneficial to the story, then it would be my pleasure to contribute any way I can :D
That's great to hear that you feel the backstory worked out. Juggling the characters and story lines from here on in must add up and indirectly connect that dots with each other so getting the thumbs up from you gives me that peace of mind at least, lol!
I totally see what you mean when possible story arc's are broken down, explained and reasons for final choices given. It's so much fun and can't tell you what a joy it is discussing it with you. Will absolutely do the same when you decided to release your masterpiece! :)
Yes, bro. I'm 100% serious when I say that if their are certain elements I feel may require a second opinion and because you've had previous experience with the subject matter I cover, would love to run some stuff past you in the future. If you have the time, of course! I've got pretty much the entire book's story under wraps and know the fate for each character now, but it's the little details now that need the most clarification and work.
Thanks once again, @jedau, you awesome, unparalleled gift to the community of Steemit!
Yeah, I know what you mean, the middle is always the hardest, since you already have defined characters and readers who've already invested in the story. It's a fine line which I'm sure you're going to navigate swimmingly!
That's great then :D I'm happy and honored to contribute to this epic! Just message me with your thoughts and I'll try to get to it as soon as I can. I try to carve some time daily for Steemit-related activities.