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RE: Inside The Mind of War - Part 4 (My Original Short Stories)
Oh man, oh man, oh man. This series is full of hits. You've touched upon drama, melancholy, and now you're skirting suspense and horror. Is there anything you can't do??
I anticipated the scene Meg would encounter when she got home. Beautifully scripted, brother. Her panic and suspicion at what could go wrong was so on point. My heart really raced as she tried to secure Karly. That hook at the end though... Damn! I didn't expect that!
You are a genius wordsmith, my bro. You've turned writing artworks into an art form. All this time, you've really been peeling and peeling back layers of story. We, the readers, are fortunate enough to be on this spectacular ride. Amazing job, brother!
Brother, the comments-meister of meisters! Thanks so much!
I'm really enjoying writing up this piece so bless you for your encouraging input! I must admit, it kinda chills me too to think what I would do in the situation Megan is facing. In fact, that's something that truly disturbs me. When someone you've known a very long suddenly transforms into a completely different persona. So why not make a little novella out of it, I thought.
Man, your nothing short of a shining gem on Steemit. Always inspiring and keeping me on my toes. Bless you to the ground, man. I've been toying with a couple of ending to this particular tale, but I think it was inevitable which one I'd go with! :)
I've noticed you've been a little quiet lately so just to let you know I'm refreshing your blog a few times a day to catch a new publishing. Take it easy and steem on, my brother! :)
I've had internet connection issues last week, and I attended my cousin's wedding last weekend, so I've been quite busy. Since I'm doing weekly updates, not a lot of pressure with getting back into posting. The downside of being away for 2 or more days though is that I have a lot to catch up on in terms of comments and replies haha!
I fully trust your process, and I just know that you have picked the best ending for the story. Just keep on posting, and I'll keep on supporting. You can trust me on that, brother :D