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RE: UNPROVEN Chapter Twelve "Start the morning out with a Bang"
Wait, what? I might be forgetting something. Did Grayson and Andie have an encounter before?
For all of Grayson's sweetness, I can't help but feel like his actions here feel entitled. I guess that's how you wanted him to come across, sis. For a minute there, I think he channeled his inner Jared and bit down on Ary haha! You could really feel Grayson's insatiable lust seep through. I'm glad it wasn't a high five that welcomed Ary in the morning, but I kind of wish she climaxed as well. She's so lucky to have had this kind of experience for her first time! Nice work, the impossible DREEM!
In the first chapter I think, when he and the dude are in the car and they run across the girls crossing the street, Grayson's thoughts reveal the andie moment, and also when he's thinking about who to choose for his next seasonal girlfriend (no one else knows though)
Ooohhhh so it happened off-screen. Whew! I'm bummed I missed that implied detail, but I'm glad I didn't miss anything too major. For a second there, I thought I missed a chapter.