This reads like a party scene in a great teen movie. I like it! I giggled a lot while reading through the girls' awkward entrance. The dialogue there was top notch and it really emphasized that it's their first time attending one of these events. I really like the choice of words, and I'm not at all surprised that you were able to pull it off. It's cool that they ran into Brian when they did. They could've easily froze at the door. Well, except for Andie, who is surprisingly feisty. Those subtle things don't go unnoticed, sis. Great work with this chapter!