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RE: The Allies of Old; Book Two Renewal: Chapter Fifty Three "Raised by the Damned"

in #story7 years ago

See, now this is what I'm talking about. This is probably my favorite chapter of the book, if not the series so far. Okay, maybe not the series, but for the whole of Renewal. It's exposition-heavy, yet it was a quick read. You said a lot in so few words, and just by going through this, I not only understand Tyros' motivation, but also where he's coming from.

It was just so good. The writing was on point, and you really covered a lot of ground here that many of the earlier (and longer) chapters didn't even begin to scratch. Beat-by-beat, I really love the energy infused into this one, which is weird since there wasn't a whole lot of action here. Masterful work!

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