I knew heading in that this story was going to be explicit, but I wasn't prepared for what I read haha! I'd say it's a good thing! Reading The Allies of Old, I've already developed a "voice" for your writing style, which is quite similar to Today Again. For this one, I know that it's you who wrote it, but it really feels like a different person, which is great!

I very much liked the intro. This really set the stage for what's to come (oops!) hahahaha! I always try to get ahead of the story by trying to make predictions, but I simply couldn't for this one, even though you laid out the pieces quite nicely, sis. In a way, I'm relieved. Nice to sit back and just enjoy the whole ride for a change. I think that this was a worthy first self-published book and I, for one, cannot wait to see how things unfold.
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I can double entendre, too ;)