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RE: The Turned-Table || Episode One
I hope your story doesn't end sorrowful for life :( I enjoyed reading it, you kept me intrigued. I would add more images to break up the paragraphs. Great job!
I hope your story doesn't end sorrowful for life :( I enjoyed reading it, you kept me intrigued. I would add more images to break up the paragraphs. Great job!
Your suggestions are welcome and I would apply them in future posts.