Excellent story in which two people begin their marriage with enthusiasm but the difficulties and lack of communication makes a dent in their union. The sad thing is that the most affected are the children who are in the middle of the hurricane. We should read the second part of the story when both are old. Receive my affections @agmoore.
Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad you thought of the children. When I wrote the story, the children in both families, Larry's and Evan's, were in my mind. These seem secondary to a marriage breakup, but of course may suffer the most significant consequences. And they are powerless.