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RE: [Original Sci-Fi Story] Imaginary Friend – An Artificial Intelligence is injected into the brain of an unsuspecting man (Part 2 of 2)
I love short stories.  It doesn't take too long to become invested in the story.
I absolutely LOATHE short stories.  If I read a good one, and become invested in the story, then I'm ready for a ten volume series..
In my opinion you handled this perfectly. there was exactly zero suspension of disbelief required.
Lol. I know what you mean.