IMPROMPTU HAIKU 2 (Reader Participation Requested)

in #story8 years ago (edited)

I’m going to try something different today and hope you join in. Most of us have attempted writing haiku in school because we were forced to.

As a writer, I’ve discovered that the act of writing haiku is a highly effective way to keep your skill-set sharp and it also totally crushes the effects of writer’s block by opening up new channels of creativity.



Incase you've never heard the term haiku or have been out of school for a very long time (like I have) and the memories are hazy...the definition of Haiku is as follows:

Haiku is a very short form of Japanese poetry. Traditional haiku consist of 17 total syllables, in three lines of 5, 7, and 5 syllables respectively.

This post is meant be highly interactive. I encourage you to write your own haiku in the comments below (first line should be 5 syllables, second line 7 syllables, third line 5 syllables)

Here’s mine:

If wishes were stars
we would wear shades at midnight,
shielding lovelorn eyes.

Now try yours in the comments below!

(Gif sourced from Giphy.com)


One participant will be chosen at random to receive a free autographed copy of my book on writing, One Word At A Time, Finding Your Way as an Indie Author. Over twenty years of lessons I’ve learned as a writer (most of them, the hard way) are included in this book.

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A tilt of the glass
he savors the nectars touch,
lost in emptiness.

Hmm..,I could use a book like that!

I like this one the most out of the others

@macksby the natural

I reread this one again this morning. It's still awesome. Great job!

@macksby, you're a winner! Can you please email me your address again at [email protected]? Thanks!

WOW... I don't know what to say -- I'd like to thank the academy... lol.
Thanks, @ericvancewalton!!!

Run to the forest
Make your home among the trees
Relish creation

When I go to sleep
I know I will wake up soon
with work on my mind

Fitting for me tonight, Eric, though not too poetic. :)

Ah, @fairytalelife, this describes perfectly the blessing and the curse of the creative. : )

I want you to know
That somewhere, deep inside you
Something bright does glow...

I love Haiku.
I will love to read that book.Here is my try,

Determination
Can make the impossible
Possible for all

#2
Invisible wind
Your damage is visible
Making history

very nice!

You're a winner of the autographed book, @mindfreak! Can you please email me your address at [email protected]? Please use subject header, "Haiku Contest". Thanks and congratulations!

The world is a dream
Nobody ever escapes
Dream yourself a way
:)

Many men have sought,
why he is to live today.
Can he find true peace?

Ha ha ..... good one ........here I try my HAIKU ---
life is nothing
dream is everything
but, there is no existence
of dream without life.

Cross the Rubicon
A new world of no return
Trust in the outcome

Ok, I'll try.

Here sit, broken hearted,
Came to s..t, but only f..ted.

Sorry. Poor attempt at humor. Writing was never my strong point, (but practicing!)

Hey, WTH, at least you tried!

I'll get better. I promise.

Thanks for the vote! :-)

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