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RE: 'Derailed' - Story Chain #3 Where You're the Writer and 100 Whaleshares for the Winner

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Part 4 continued....

"What!", I exclaimed. "Private investigator lady! No where, and at no time did I say assasin!" I responded. "I'll pay you ....", she began. "No!", I responded harshly, surprised by my own tone. "Our meeting is confidential forget you ever met me and I'll do the same." What the fuck I thought as I opened the door without even considering that i was in a car. Luckily the car was just creeping away from the sidewalk, as I stumbled and almost fell on my face . Slightly embarrassed, I marched forward quickly as if nothing had occurred. I heard the of the car open, then close again as I heard her say ,"let him go."
My pace quickened as the reality of what just happened set in. I quickly made my way back to the station. I could still make it to the meeting if I wanted, but for some reason that made no sense. I arrived to the track just as the train heading back home arrived. Lost in thought I grabbed the first seat and sat down. "What the fuck!", I thought I sat there staring at the floor.

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Great addition, thanks @dreamingirwin. Could you do me a little favour and number your part of the story, thanks.

That's perfect, thanks dude.

Thanks @dreamingirwin for your entry, your contribution was fantastic and much appreciated. The winner has just been anounced along with the new story chain here - https://steemit.com/story/@freedomexists/an-innocent-man-betrayed-by-guilt-story-chain-4-where-you-re-the-writer-and-100-whaleshares-for-the-winner

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