Okay. You got me. That was very effective. I love your characterization, and the twist wasn't obvious a mile away, which is almost impossible to do with a story like this.
Well done, mate. I'll be following.
Okay. You got me. That was very effective. I love your characterization, and the twist wasn't obvious a mile away, which is almost impossible to do with a story like this.
Well done, mate. I'll be following.
Thanks a mil, @cristof, I really appreciate the feedback, and the follow. I'll be doing likewise :)