I think I had a weird twinge of worn horror and apathetic sympathy while reading this (not even sure how that works)...I think you know you've created a literary piece truly mindblowing when those that read it aren't even really sure what they're feeling anymore.

So good job doing that, and keep these coming. I gotta follow for more, this stuff is too engaging.

And now, as a result of this, I also know where I need to come to look for inspiration when writing my own shock-and-awe pieces.