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RE: Chattels and chains

in #story6 years ago

If fours is what you want then we will make this story a four parter.

I will be back for a proper comment but for now, here's a baby goat and a cat.

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Thank you again, Felix for co-writing with me!

There was a lot of power and emotion with your beginning this week. Saddie's abduction and the awful auctioning were well written but painful to read. Though this is fiction, the awful truth is that these atrocities existed (and do still though to a much lesser extent than in the past). Her and Mister's tearful breakdown in the aftermath was a true and honest reaction that anyone with a heart could understand. It is shameful that some people exist with intent to purposely bring suffering unto others. I find hope in the fact that there are more people in this world like Saddie, Mister and the Withers, who find such actions deplorable.

Indeed! Well said here @brisby, lovely co-writer. Thanks for bringing up all these things and let’s help create a World without suffering! As writers, this is one of our social responsibilities: to showcase the crassness of our daily lives to something the reader can confront! But another: to make the World of Ideals not only presentable but achievable; which shall always showcase that the World of crass isn’t eternal and something surmontable! For we can critique, but also imagine a New World that’ll overcome the Old World!

Otherwise, merry Xmas!
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A world without suffering would be a marvelous blessing. Thanks again, Felix and I love the festive art!!

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