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RE: For the Love of Hurt (My Original Flash Fiction)
So different from the other selections of yours that I have read. This one full of raw grieving emotion, the light ray portending good things for him and his wife, as if the mother was looking down on her. the scenery depiction, it is like I am standing next to an oak in a corner away from the grave and watching it unfold, absolutely wonderful scene.
Hey there, @bashadow! Yeah, this was a path I've never trodden down since my time on Steemit. But one I'm glad I did. After all, I feel being able to describe an extreme spectrum of emotions is key to a writer's ability to convey every message possible to the reader. I'm really grateful you let me know I'm on the right track. Really meaningful comment by you and humbly appreciated.
Thanks very much, buddy. Bless... :)
I think you are on the right track. Emotions are of prime importance when character building, making them seem real. But they need to be consistent with the character. If he is an asshole, he needs to be one, unless something happens that changes the character.
Beautifully said. An absolute fundamental concept to implement when putting together a half decent work of fiction.