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RE: A Geek in Prison - A Life Series by Charlie Shrem (Part 4 - Getting Sick, Sober, & Healthy with Yoga)

in #story • 8 years ago (edited)

Hey , I'd like to point out a error in your spelling , - You wrote tried instead tries - "My throat being blocked off, it took me a good 20 -tried- before it finally accepted my voice." And also Breath instead of Breathe - "Officer, I can't breath. Please help me."

  • PS- I'm not a grammar Nazi , although it may seem it
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