BILAL- #1.AN INTRODUCTION( Short story series)

in #story6 years ago (edited)

Bilal is a young boy of 16 years ,he lives in Geeta colony,Delhi. He is a student of class XII in science stream and intends to clear one of the engineering exams in Delhi. His Father is a private primary school teacher in countryside ,mother house wife and he is youngest among his siblings ,here he lives in a rented accommodation with his friends.

A bright lad in studies he has a way with people and a penchant for making friends, his hobbies are singing and acting. He gives home tution to junior students to make some extra income.

Today is just an another day in his life, while his friends generally pass their evenings in leisure activities he generally give tution to fund his studies .

He returns to his room and and takes some time to rest before cooking dinner. While he was standing on his balcony he see many things shopkeepers merrily talking with each other , some young boys on tea stalls with their unending discussuons , and a juice stall at the right corner of the road. A lady is standing with her child at the juice stall ,she orders one glass of juice for her child , and when the juice man asks her if she wants one for herself she politely declines at the same time she gently stroke her child hair.

While noticing this Bilal tries to understand the unconditional love of a mother for a child which are full of sacrifices and compassion.
This also remind him of his own mother and how he has not gone to his home for last 6 months.What all sacrifices his mother might be going through to support his education.

He cooks dinner , studies for and hour and goes to bed. While on bed he anxiously count the time it would take for him to turn the things around.Tomorrow would be another day for him to continue his hustle. His mind races in thoughts of upcoming events exams , entrance test, annual cultural events and..HOME..

Lets see what destiny has in store for him.

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Appreciate your writing skills in this post.... You have written down the story perfectly but only thing which I can't see here in your story is lack of suspense (curiosity) ,, what was your aim of writing..... I appreciate you created your own work.... Keep up the good work

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