Powerful. I was held entranced throughout the whole poem with your rhythm, and your imagery pulled me into the world you created. The message was delivered in a meaningful tone and clearly received. I felt the tears begin to build at points, and then you brought us up to be held in our own strength. Beautiful.
Thanks brother. It was one of those times something was calling to me to write it. That is primarily how things act for me when I write as @chaospoet.
I'm glad someone else saw what I was seeing.