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RE: The (Horse) With No Name (Part 3)
As long as it's intentional then there is nothing wrong with it in my opinion :) making a good little read this series man, keep it up!
As long as it's intentional then there is nothing wrong with it in my opinion :) making a good little read this series man, keep it up!
I just don't want to bump the reader out of the story and back into reality. I want to keep them trapped in the little world I've created! Muah ha hah! :D