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RE: #Story-Mentor: I walked alone...
That's terrible - in a good way!
It's poignant, horrible, wonderful, desperately sad.
I've read it once and it captured me to the extent that I saw nothing to drag me out of the story. I'll read it again and see if there's anything...
For now...
Well done!
Thank you. I find a lack of continuity in everything i write. There is no flow in the text. As if my brain is jumping around and my fingers aren't able to keep up.
How do you manage to get your thoughts into words without losing a lot of it in the process?