Tragedies of Life

in #story-300words7 years ago

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Lockie was 6 months old when Tim was born.
Lockie used to visit Tim's place quite often and stay for days.
They spent a lot of time with each other and eventually became best friends.
They went to the same school and used to share both happy and sad moments with each other. They were inseparable and swore to be together for the rest of their lives.

One day, while playing, Tim threw a stone which hit a person in the head and he started bleeding badly. The person went straight to Tim's father (who was Lockie's uncle also) to complain about his son. Fearing the punishment, both Lockie and Tim did not go home and stayed outside under open skies during night when both of them were barely 13.
Lockie took the responsibility of the accident to save Tim from his father.

Their friendship was growing stronger with time. After finishing high school they were separated because they had to join different colleges but that only made them realise the true value of their friendship.

A new phone had hit the market and Tim wanted to have it, so he called Lockie for his opinion and they decided to purchase it next day.
Expecting a call from Tim, Lockie did get a call early in the morning, not from him but from his brother and rushed to Tim's house where a huge crowd had gathered and in the center of that gathering was Tim, lying flat on his back ready to be taken to the graveyard.

Word count=257
Although the short story contest by @swissclive is over but I wanted to write one because I promised one.

I have never written a story before so it may not be good enough for you.

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wow amazing story it's really make me curious about how did Tim died ??? 😕😕

That is how life is.
No one knows how they are going to die

I kind of like tragedy. I also like your style but i think there may be lost of connection with the readers because of some missing plot regardless of it been a Short story.

I look forward to reading more from you.

Your suggestion is much appreciated.
Thank you

Hmmm, not what I expected, but that's Life, isn't it... We can't know everything...

That is absolutely right.
I never expected this to happen that way...But then this is how life is.

I just loved the story it keeps you thinking, relative thinking and comparing it with life has a great effect too. Ty

If this is your beginning I must say you are a great story writer, but the end of the story keeps one thinking how did Tim die?

Wait...what?
That can't be the end...
How did Tim die? Why did Tim die?
Was he sick?

That can't be answered because the writer choose not to.
Every story can't have explanations and perfect endings.

😂😂😁😃
Nice one. Can't wait to read your next stuff.

Too many loopholes that need patching. ;)
This could be a good short story. I wonder how the phone and the death is related. I hope you make a continuation soon.

Great story..did you written it by yourself..really good.

Yes I did.
My first story

First attempt..really good.

Sad story. I dnt wanna read a sad ending. Huuhu

Great story sur
Thanks for sharing with us

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