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RE: Hibiscus

in #story-300words7 years ago

Sorry it took me so long to get to the piece! I usually only have 1-2 days a week where I try to cram in as much "curation" as I can manage, and I didn't get to this last week :<

Anyway, I quite liked this piece. I liked that I wondered why the hand was "grasped," and then it felt so natural when we discovered it was a mother and daughter.

I'm also really fond of humans as a story-creating engine, and this form of proto-causality is quite mythic in its formation, so that idea in and of itself was worth the price of entry to a much bigger story.

Cute, concise, and clever. Good job!

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