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RE: Corrosion Engineering: Introduction and Cost Implications of Corrosion (Part 1)
Long article :P
I enjoyed the story and the description and I think that by following some of the pointers I already gave you, it could be more concise, without losing your personal style.
Also don't be afraid to better yourself by learning about the chemical process of oxidation and corrosion. At the end of the day it will help you be better in your work.
Cheers!
Well not that I'm not aware of the chemical processes on corrosion. It's just that I am discussing the cost implications instead.
Maybe on the next one you can share the knowledge with the others. Many people will want to learn, myself included. Even if I know the processes, reading a new article or even skimming it makes the brain remember the concepts and keeps the cognitive process fresh. You can even postpone Alzheimer's through keeping your brain active.