Hi @najma. I would say, this is a tremendous improvement compared to your article yesterday. Kudos. Just one suggestion that you might want to consider:

• I would suggest for you use the Markdown Editing, to make it easy for readers. For example, you can "bold" some of the critical points or even the title of the new topic.

For example:

Ultrasonic Application in Midwifery

In relation to the effects of ultrasonic waves and ultra-wave nature, ultrasonic waves are used as diagnoses and treatments.

Reference :

• https://id.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ultrasonik
• https://bfl-definisi.blogspot.co.id/2017/03/gelombang-ultrasonik-infrasonik-audiosonik.html

It looks much better isn't it? If you're not familiar with the Markdown Editing, you can click here, to learn about it.

Use your imagination and be creative on how you would want your article to appear to the readers. If you need some help, feel free to contact me through Discord.