Page 12 working for the story "Olivia and the SuperStar"

shrazi (69)in #steemjet • 7 years ago

Hi there,
here is my working on Page 12 for the story "Olivia and the SuperStar" by @dimimp (steemjet)
Hope My work is on right track.
"I tried to do my best, but it is not sure that my art gets attention every time :D "
So here is my work
Page12

Hope You Like my work
Thanks

#art #graphic #olivia

7 years ago in #steemjet by shrazi (69)

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dimimp (70) 7 years ago (edited)

Perfect. All that cartoon watching is finally paying off!

I like how the dark hair blends into the black background to cut down on all the busy lines allowing her face on her bike to be the focal point. That pointy hand is perfect, but you did not stop there, you also went with the open arms on the other character to imply that EVERYONE wants some. You nailed this image again. Incredible.

I'm not easily impressed, and can fault in almost anything (I am actually overly critical to a fault), but I can also see the best elements in someone's work to offer encouragement and direction, but this whole book was inspired by jogreh's perfect image, which was inspired by shartsy's masterpiece of minimalist perfection, and my friend, you have consistantly achieved perfection, more than anybody I have ever worked with in this medium, and therefore I am grateful for making my job here easier. My only criticism of your pages has been my own grammer. Your contributions have been a pleasant surprise.

Also the fact that Olivia's bling is back (after it disappeared on the previous page) indicates the fact that our tangible wealth (stuff) can be easily changed back into BTC and back and forth, etc. Subliminal, powerful, true, effective, and in your case brilliant!

Feel free to break up the story line to fit your image, because I'm not too sure how this next Dr Seuss part is supposed to flow, which is why I left it wide open to the graphic artist's interpretation (what is easy and effective for you to portray). I will give you $200 per page. Feel free to take as many pages as you feel is necessary to get our point across. I knew I would have trouble visualizing this next part, and you have been a godsend so far.

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$1.46

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shrazi (69) 7 years ago

heartly thanks @dimimp, your words and every comment give happiness to me here.
I will do my best, but not guarantee or promise anything. as yesterday GOD BLESSED Baby Boy to my relative and close Frined @meher04. So I was/am busy there. But I took time for page12.
I am very much interested in this work, so don't want to discontinue it.