100 Days of Poetry / Day 8 - Groundbreaking / Slomljena zemlja ( Eng / Cro version ) Original poetry / art
Original poem by
Mr. Spacely
when I come close to you,
who were you for?
and while I stare at dusty lips of yours
and while I peek your wrinkled face
I ask myself
have you always been yours?
windows through time
You defied all,
witnessed it
But you, father of our ancestors,
still sleep peacefully
like you just don't care
are missing melodies
Only eyes can hear
how you suffer,
care,
while you feel our foot stamps,
and the help of our hand
Original poem by
Mr. Spacely
kad ti priđem bliže,
čija li si bila...
I dok gledam sušne usne tvoje,
dok ti gledam naborano lice,
ja se pitam,
dal' si uvijek svoja?
prozore kroz vrijeme
Svemu si prkosila,
svjedočila
No ti, oče naših predaka,
i dalje snivaš mirno
kao da te briga nije
nemaju ni zvuka
Očima se može čuti
kako trpiš,
brineš,
dok te lome hladne noge naše,
a miluju ruke
by
Mr. Spacely
I will appreciate any feedback. Feel free to speak your mind, I'm open to all suggestions and critics, and I will take time to think about them seriously.
Once again, thanks for the support!
Very moving.
Love these words especially:
Brilliant entry into 100 Days Poetry Challenge
Thank you very much... It wasn't in my deepest wishes that I'll move somebody with my poems... But, art is a funny surprising thing :)
92 more days... But I'm eager to see me on 100th day :)
Thanks for stopping by, Luka.
Thanks a lot! Hope this channel will grow in no time! Much love!
Really nice, I like the words in both languages. Beautiful :)
Thank you! I still can't accept this English version, but that's ok...one day :P lol
Thanks for stopping by, Luka.
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