100 Days of Poetry / Day 15 - Two dreams Under / Dva sna Pod - Original poetry / art

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- Two dreams Under -
Original poem by
Mr. Spacely

There I lay
in my everlasting bed,
like I'm dreaming of the feelings

With no one left behind
I found myself alone now
What possible mistakes led me to be here

I hear your soft naked footsteps
while your voice soothes my ears
Tied ropeless to this bed of mine
I wonder why I'm here

If only I could close my eyes
and forget the darkness that I saw
Now I, maybe, know the truth
and see my life is gone

I sleep awake Two dreams Under your feet,
through feelings, I can walk
I'll stop the time to think of you,
hug you with my eternal soul

- Dva sna Pod -
Original poem by
Mr. Spacely

Ležao sam sneno
u svom vječnom krevetu,
kao da sanjam o osjećajima

Nikog nisam ostavaljao za sobom
ali sada sam se našao sam
Koje su me pogreške dovele da budem ovdje

Čujem tvoje mekane korake, gole,
dok tvoj glas smiruje mi uši
Privezan za krevet svoj
pitam se zašto sam ja ovdje

Kada bi samo mogao zatvoriti oči
i zaboraviti tamu koju sam vidio
Možda sada istinu znam i
vidim da moj je život prošao

Spavam budan Dva sna Pod nogama,
kroz osjećaje, ja hodati mogu
Zaustaviti ću vrijeme da razmišljam o vama,
zagrliti vas sa svojom vječnom dušom

Original Poetry and Art
by
Mr. Spacely

This time I wrote my poem in English and then translated it into my native Croatian language. That's why it flows better in English. Anyway, still experimenting

Anyway, thank you all for stopping by. I will appreciate any feedback. Feel free to speak your mind, I'm open to all suggestions and critics, and I will take time to think about them seriously.
Once again, thanks for the support!

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     6 years ago 

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       6 years ago 

      This is beautiful and deep, although I'm uncertain what it means.

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         6 years ago 

        Hi, @musicman99. Thanks a lot and let me explain.

        This poem is a thought of a soul of a guy that's buried in his coffin... Imagine that the soul woke up after they buried this guy, and it tries to remember who it was when he was alive... After, it realizes that the physical side of a guy is dead and that it doesn't matter who he was, it matters to spread the love/hugs...

        Hope this helps :)

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